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Rated: 13+ | (1.0)
I'm giving this both an thumbs down and a one half star for the fact that despite the title and intro implying that you could fatten up both gender of heroes, You restricted to female only in here, If that's the case then you might want to change the title and intro to make it clear that this an female weight gain only story as it's a dick move to imply that you can fatten the male heroes only to be told that "Nope Females only pal!".
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
i like to said im impressed with this story.
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