Its not my type of story, I jsut stumbled across and read it, so since I read it I felt I should review it.
because I found myself wanting the story longer, telling me what had brough the young Man to this point and who the old Man was, I felt I had to give it the highest mark, becasue it left me asking for more.
perhaps you should expand on it
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