Nice quick poem. I'm glad you gave your character a gender. But it would have been better if it was anonymous, that way the imagination could have been more open to the reader. Never the less, nice read.
Lovely poem you have written here. Being in a similar situation like this once a long time ago, I totally connect with this poem. I don't know if this actually happened to you (If it did, then my heart goes out to you) but it did to me and my life has changed for better and worse because of it. Well done. Keep up the good work.
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