I really enjoyed this piece and thought that you did a wonderful job writing it.
Your characters were wonderful and I found them to be well rounded with a depth that really brought them to the fore of the story.
I also enjoyed your writing style and thought the work flowed well from one scene to the next.
I particularly enjoyed the flashback of the time Cepnir spent hunting with his mother. I felt that the interruption was an interesting hook and kept me interested in what would happen next, and what already happened.
Thank you for posting this.
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