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Review by Justicar thawn Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
You sir are brilliant, I read all the chapters and the plot is good it is well developed, the small touches of suspense were nice and well placed:) my only complaint is that you really need someone to do a spell check for you it kinda ruins the story when some of it can be misinterpreted but that is easily rectified keep writing. It was brilliant*

*Good on you for giving translations to our American counterparts. It makes the stories run smoother when readers fully understand what is happening. Maybe place then just afterwards or in brackets otherwise it can get a bit tiresome
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Review by Justicar thawn Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Well written, has a nice plot. Good development, some of the lines I liked weren't really developed but that being said just I find fault in a well written well thought out interactive
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