I like how the poem flowed and how you described summer's breeze. I can imagine the imagery from the second half of your poem, nice word choice. sweet and short
Nicely written, i was wondering if this is from personal experience. I could feel the words come off my computer screen while reading your writing. Nice job with the word choices as well. I would love to read more of your pieces, if you would share with me.
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