Raw emotion. The criteria of a 'perfect' poem is definatly not found in this one. The syllables are off, the punctuation is absent, the rhythm is strange, yet thats what makes it all the more better. Its raw emotion about a true happening. All your works are like this and I like them more than I would about a 'perfect' poem about a whole bunch of fake crap.
Amazing. Beautiful. I would never be capable of writing such a true work of beauty. It describes perfectly the relationship I have with a friend of mine... Thanks extremely for writing this. I'll definatly have to looks at the rest of your portfolio now.
What an absolutly BEAUTIFUL poem. I love the concept. So sad and yet so true. I love this poem. You're a wonderful writer. I'm just sorry that your heart had to be broken in such a painful and common way.
Please accept the love of a stranger,
~Bone
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