Wow man great job! I really like how you capturred each charcter so perfectly MAy and Brendan obessed with eating and in the newer chapters Roxanne being obessed with their fat, flabby bodies. Wally is really done well too. I hope one day to be as good as you are at writing chapters, I'm still working on improving mine. Please continue making your well made chapters for this story.
I really like this story you've created. I enjoy reading the chapters made so far and wish that it makes even more views and chapters later on. You really know how to entertain readers, fathinata. Thank you and please continue writing. Here is gp for you in this review.
this looks like it could really have some potential speechjon! So far it looks well wriiten and the rules are well established and gice readera nd writers a semse of what to expect in this story.
Wow let me tell you Jimmy I really like your story, its very fun and entertaining to read. The chapters of all the people who have written for you story really show each of their own talents. It's really nice to know that such a story has so many great, well written chapters.
These chapters would not have been made hade it not been for you to make this interactive story. I thank you and everyone else who has contributed to this story.
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