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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
This poem was really good, I feel that many people feel like this on the inside. This poem was very real, and brought out many emotions in me.
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Review by bmarshall Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
This poem is really good. I like the story it tells of a mistress wishing he would stay instead of going back to his other girl. I think you shouldn't repeat the same words in a line so much.
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