Hello, Opal Somnambulist. A well-written and interesting story. To be honest I never read something like this before. Such a creative idea and nice flowing plot. A good usage of words and keep the readers throughout the story. Overall, I love your story.
Hello, Dracomurex. A well-written and interesting story. I love how you describe the pain you feel when you break up with someone. Such a creative imagination to tell the pain. Overall, I love your story.
Hello, TheResistanceWriter. Welcome to WDC. I agree with your opinion. Some government should blame themselves first before blaming other people. But, would you like to change something in the first paragraph? You write Thursday twice.
While giving a speech to students on Thursday at the John F. Kennedy Jr Forum at the Institute Of Politics at Harvard University on Thursday..
You should choose either one of them.
Overall, I like your written work.
Blue
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