Hey there! This is definitely an interesting read and I would love to see more! There were a few grammatical errors in the first paragraph and a long run on sentence in the second, but despite those minuscule flaws, it was good! Good luck on your writing!
I can't say this is my cup of tea in terms of storytelling, yet I still think it was worth my while. A few grammatical errors in the begin and some poor sentences, but I'd say 90% throughout, it was very well done.
This was awesome. At first, I felt a bit confused with the names and locations being tossed around without any way of understanding, but over time, it played out naturally. There was one spelling error, but besides that, it was a fantastic read. I look forward to reading more about Cor!
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