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Review by Bianca Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
It was very entertaining. I think you did an amazing job timing this story and it kept my interest. The story never slowed down or had a dull moment. I was wondering if you'd read and review my story,"A day with death" as your story was sort of similar. I have enclosed 50 gps to thank you in advance for your review. Thank you so much. Have a nice day! Great Job.
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Review of Fade Away  Open in new Window.
Review by Bianca Author IconMail Icon
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Wow. I think you really brought that story to life. I would be greatful if you would review my piece,"A day with death" as you are an amazing writer. I thank you for sharing your talents with us. I am sending you 50 gps in this review. Thank you in advance for your review.
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Review of Return of Wendigo  Open in new Window.
Review by Bianca Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Great Job! Did you know that Charmed the tv show had an episode where the middle sister Piper became a wendigo? anyway, Amazing Job, so keep writing and could you check out some of my work because I'd like you to critique it. Thank you so much.bianca
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Review of The Perfect Wife  Open in new Window.
Review by Bianca Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Good Job! I would definately check out some of my work! Please, send gp's! I really love writing and you would be the perfect critique. So, In that I'd like to give you a sample.

"In may my heart goes, pitterpat and always something like that, do not add to my dismay, for I'll see another day."

I know a bad sample, but I promise it's better writing and it is worth critiquing!
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Review by Bianca Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Great Job! A wonderful story. I am a young writer and when I am alone or don't know where I belong I write about it. You did a great Job bringing that to life. I myself would definately publish that story. Please Write some more for the world to read
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Review of Melly's Reviews  Open in new Window.
Review by Bianca Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Born with truly blond hair,
we all still love you that is fair,
always and forever it will be,
mine and yours for you and me.

Something we shared until the end,
Then it came time and you started to bend,
Came crashing down on all of us three,
I wish you happy life for eternity.

Someday I'll be right where you are,
That someday's far from a star,
In my time I miss you hard,
please don't leave I need a guard.

In present time your not here,
Once or twice I shed a tear,
for you deserve it you were near,
with you I felt safe and opened up,
all my trust and now is in my pup.

Present day on October first,
today is now the worst,
passing by so now quickly,
Now today I feel so sickly.

I'm sorry for things in years past,
you know How I've sassed,
the things I've said,
the things I've done,
I count on them and now I've won.

I've won because It's you who raised me,
A perfect time to let you see,
what part was yours I now resemble,
and now the school desk I assemble.

This poem dear grandmother is for you,
don't leave oh the skies of blue,
a picture of you I paint in my head,
And now it's time to go to bed.

Thank you now for all you've done,
forever and today from the sun,
teach as you did before,
and I will learn from you still once more.

This poem is named Life. For my Grandmother in heaven.

This poem is for my other Grandmother's birthday, Tomorrow.

For many years you trained me,
up until now,
I am here to thank you through birthday wishes that's how,
find a way to read this in all that you do,
Happy, happy birthday this poem is for you.

This next one is for my dead grandmother again.

Wind is forcefull so were you,
rain is forcefull that is true,
come back in love and set me free,
we all miss you and I agree.

Love was in the air,
when we lost you,
It was not fair,
Lifes not fair and that is true,
You loved me and I loved you.
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Review of We Are Protected  Open in new Window.
Review by Bianca Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
This was great I dread others stories but yours I like. A story needs a plot and your story had one . keep writing and I will keep reading. Thank you for writing and taking your time to share with us your talent because it is truly amazing and deserves recognition.!
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Review by Bianca Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Touching and Really right for you. I get it and love the story. Please keep sharing your talent with us on writing.com we want to hear your talent and I want to read it I am really interested in you and what you can do. Believe and you can do anything.
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Review of Sicily  Open in new Window.
Review by Bianca Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (2.5)
Is it supposed to rhyme? or not? I'm confused this poem is okay not great nor good just okay. I can see a bud though coming to the surface so keep trying because sooner or later it might just pay off you never know I never know. And you have a big future ahead.
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Review by Bianca Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Good poem It lacks something though, I do not know what that is! I do know it's missing something though. Eventually it will blossom though so good job and keep writing. It will eventually get better and better and It's nothing to do with you it's the inspiration.
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Review of The Double Duty  Open in new Window.
Review by Bianca Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
I like it I do not love it. Can you explain the concept to me I do not get it at all. It is both a blessing and a pain. Oh sorry a pleasure and a pain. What is a pleasure and a pain? Tell us readers we want to know we write in explanetory form and I miss that in yours. I am sorry.
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Review by Bianca Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
I completely get the article and am not worried about getting a job it's years away anyway, so I thought I'd look to see what's out there I stumbled on this and I truly get It it is something I know I would do. I understand It fully and would apply if I was old enough.
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Review by Bianca Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
This reached me at a level no other poem ever has I really like the meaning of it all, I feel something special like an emotion off of it thank you for writing it. I never have said that to anyone before so thank you dearly I'd like some more. Please regard all I have said this message to you Is now being read.
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Review of First Prayer  Open in new Window.
Review by Bianca Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
I find this beautiful and Amazing! God is Amazing and gifted isn't he! No one gave him those gifts he formed them for himself. Just make sure we all give God the glory, not the man. I agree with the plot and like it don't get me wrong just put a sense of God in there.
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Review by Bianca Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Somebody on here knows how to write!!! Wow! I'm in shock of how AMAZing and Fantastic that was. Please read my stuff. Prefferably my poems, they are my best. You are completely AMAZING! No one can stand IN the way of your writing dreams, truly great!
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Review of DARKNESS  Open in new Window.
Review by Bianca Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Gory, Yet unbeatable any person can look at this and say, " Wow, she's a real writer." I know you are through your expression and description and the description is not boring either. I'm glad you could share that talent with us. We need talent. Your talent.
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Review by Bianca Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Interesting, yet worth five stars. I love it please write more I need a new chapter to it! It's soo interesting and not filled with boring details. I like detail just not the detail that takes forever. So keep writing for us and we'll keep reviewing.
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Review by Bianca Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Cool job it was funny and entertaining. Great and keep writing I do like it, just maybe explain a little more I read a lot and I know you are not a real writer, but just explain more. And maybe you will be a real writer it seems like a career is coming fast.
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Review of First drum set  Open in new Window.
Review by Bianca Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
Kare,
Good job. I think it could have been less repetative and could be more interesting. I did like it, but I'm just not caught on the rythem is it a poem or a story If it is a story.. Where is the plot? And the eye catching problem. Each story has a problem.. Where's yours?
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Review of Martin Granger  Open in new Window.
Review by Bianca Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (2.0)
This was fine, yet I feel not blossomed as a young writer you have not blossomed yet I do not see the point in all of this. I just see a story with no fine line of a plot. I liked it, but to be honest, I didn't love it. Keep trying and just keep improving.
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