Hi Tigerlily - this is fantastic, made me want to cry. I really liked how you made it a fairytale which really highlighted your devastation at losing something a child believes in 100%. I'm so sorry for your loss, I can't imagine how much it must have hurt but this poem really conveyed your suffering.
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