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Rated: E | (4.0)
I loved the story -- cracked me up. I appreciated each of your examples of "irony" and how the kids had no idea what you were talking about. However, I did have a little trouble with the writing in the second person. Have you considered writing it in first person? It seems that the story is actually about you, the author, so the second person strategy was odd to me. Other than that, great story! So true!
Thanks for sharing the story with me/us. :)
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