I THOUGHT IT WAS BEAUTIFUL. I KNOW HOW HARD IT IS..IT IS SO HARD TO LOOSE A PET ONE THAT YOU FEEL A PART OF YOUR FAMILY...I HAD TO DO THE VERY SAME THING WITH MY SIBERIEN HUSKY LAST YEAR THE DAY WE EVACUATED FOR THE HURRICAN..I THOUGHT I'D NEVER STOP CRYING..YOUR POEM WAS LIKE I SAID BEAUTIFUL..IT BROUGHT TEARS TO MY EYES IT MADE ME REMEMBER THE DAY I HAD TO GO TO THE VET WITH MY OWN DOG.
I THOUGHT IT WAS VERY WELL WRITTEN.
LONELY WAVES BATTER MY SOUL.
STRANGE IS THIS ALIEN SHORE.
THE JOURNEY HAS TAKEN A TOLL.
HAUNTED,CHILLED TO THE CORE
BY THE UNIVERSE IN WHOLE.
CAST AWAY NOW LIKE A WHORE.
I THINK THAT PART WAS VERY STRONG.YOUR USE OR WORDING IS WONDERFUL...
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