he's fourteen and he acts like a kid i did like the story but he's 14 and his mother calls herself mommy might as well make him 4 i loved the story though that was the only problem
i dont really know how to say this but your poem is boring well first of all it doesn't ryhme no imageryno tone no figure of speech its practically just words and you just said it was a poem so yah sorry.
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