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Review of Et Cetera  Open in new Window.
Review by Lilyx* Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
Dan Strum,

This poem was very nicley written. The poem flowed with intensity and enthusiasm, bringing it to life. I over all enjoyed it very much and was sad it was so short. But you got your point across! The words fit perfectly together and described just enough to let my imagination free. Keep writing!


Love always,
LIly
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Review of Honor Bound  Open in new Window.
Review by Lilyx* Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
My god, this was beautiful. I know many people who serve for our country and this poem would probably bring tears to their eyes. Your word choice was perfect, so perfect. You used words that gave off feelings as well as strong emotions. The poem wasn't too long, nor too short. I found it catching my interest with every line. Very nice work!

Yours,
Lily
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Review of The Sound  Open in new Window.
Review by Lilyx* Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (3.0)
This story was different from most I've ever read. You had a very good choice of words and I found no grammar or spelling problems. The only con to this story was; I lost interest at some parts. I felt like it dragged on during those parts and thats why my interest was lost. But overall, this story was good.

Love
Lily
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Review of Would You Cry?  Open in new Window.
Review by Lilyx* Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I realy loved this poem. I honestetly ask this questions when i am in my darkest places. The rhyming was wonderful, as well as the whole entire poem. You definatly got your point across, this brought tears to my eyes and made me really feel. Thanks for sharing, I loved it! Write on!!
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Review of Alone  Open in new Window.
Review by Lilyx* Author IconMail Icon
Rated: ASR | (4.5)
This was a wonderful, short poem. Even know it was only a couple of lines, i loved it! I can relate to it because this is what i felt like at one time. It does get better though, no matter what. The feleing ot this poem made my heart hurt a little bit, but it was a good kind of hurt. Thanks for shring, write on!


~lily~
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Review of Into the Sun  Open in new Window.
Review by Lilyx* Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi,

I have taken the time to read your poem, and i only have my opinion to offer. You can take my adice, or through it away. I hope i help you in some way, whethers its giving you cofidence, or advice. Please don't take anything to personal, here it goes.


I loved this poem. For a first time this is really good. The poem flowed nicely and it was very creative. Although it was short, I liked it.
Thanks for sharing!!
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Review of Crushed  Open in new Window.
Review by Lilyx* Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
I'm sry, but this is not maddie. She would not do this.
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Review of Twilight's Fall  Open in new Window.
Review by Lilyx* Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
This was very short, yet very nice. The picture fit very well with the poem. It was very interesting and the title fit the poem good. Maybe there could of been a little more detail, or one more stanza. It was quite short, but was truley good. It was a very "warm" poem and I loved it. Thanks for sharing. Write on!



~lily~
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Review of Torn  Open in new Window.
Review by Lilyx* Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
This is very beautiful. I loved the ending, as well as the whole poem. The repitition made the poem have more feeling, and the words flow nicley one after another. The title fit the poem well, as the last stanza was my favorite. The ending closed the pem perfectly. Thanks for sharing, write on!



~lily~
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Review of Just a Fairytale  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
This was very emotional, but proably one of the best thing Ive ever read. I Love this peice! It is so touching and it reached out to my heart. Thanks for sharing, write on!!



~lily</3~
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Review of Nocturne Remorse  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
This was a very, very good poem. The grammar you used fit perfectly with the poem, as well as flow of the words. The whole time I was reading it, I never got bored. I enjoyed your poem, so I have no suggestions. Great job, thanks for sharing!


~lily~
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Review of The Tower  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
This was a great peice. Good grammar, and i found no mistakes. The title fit the story perfectly, and the first line caught my attention right away. I liked the plot of this story, and the ending I really enjoyed. The story was mysterious and kept me reading. Overall nice job. Thanks for sharing, Write on!



~lily~
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Review by Lilyx* Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.5)
This was very good. It was full of feeling, and the first line caught my attention right away. The flow was nice, as the grammar. Thanks for shraing, write on!
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Review of Souvenirs of Love  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
This was really good! I loved the ending, because truley, love does leave a trail. The title fit the poem well. The flow of the words were very nice. Great job! Thanks for sharing!
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Review of The Locket  Open in new Window.
Review by Lilyx* Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I absolutly loved this peice! It was very good and weel written. The story line was emotional, and i could feel what the girl was feeling. Nice job. Thanks for sharing!
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Review by Lilyx* Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.5)
I liked this peice alot. it was very creative, nice work. Write on!!


~lily~
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Review of Our Dance  Open in new Window.
Review by Lilyx* Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi! this was a interesting peice. I liked the words, and the title grabbed my attention. With the exeption of one spelling error (togeter is together) it was pretty good. Keep writing!



~lily~
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Review of Futile  Open in new Window.
Review by Lilyx* Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Nice job! although it was really short, i liked it. These sort of poems are my favorites. The lines were short, but not choppy. Good job, thanks for sharing, and Write On!
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Review of I... They...  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Awesome job! it was interesting and the words flowed nice. the set up of the poem was cool. i don't regret reading it. Thanks for sharing! Write on!
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Review of The Golden Web  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi! Thiis poem was very, very good. I understood the point of it, and it made me feel. This was very true too, which i liked. The words flowed nicly and i like the set-up. Your poem was something i certinaly won't forget and i dont regret reading it! Any one should read this peice, because they will love it! Write on!
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Review of Town of Serenity  Open in new Window.
Review by Lilyx* Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Well, this poem was very interesting and to me, good. This was something I definatly like to read. The flow was nice, and the words were descriptive. Good job, keep writing!


~lily~
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Review of Non-Humans R Us  Open in new Window.
Review by Lilyx* Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
This was reallly cool! I liked it!
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Review by Lilyx* Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
Lyssa, i really liked it! you speeled alot of things wrong though but idc. i rlly liked it.
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Review by Lilyx* Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
I thought this was a really interesting short story. it was somehting i definatly like to read. great job and keep writing!
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Review by Lilyx* Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (3.5)
i liked it, but it could have been better. maybe you should add alitttle more to it. but otherwise, that little bit was okay. keep writing!
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