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Rated: E | (4.0)
This was quite soothing to read, the prose was quite lovely as well. I'm not as familiar with the form, but my overall impression was of an event both lovely and at the same time sad (a death of 2 lovers, perhaps?). A couple of awkward phrases (eg. charming flowers blossoming, the concept of 'charming flowers' seemed to hold little meaning for me and the phrasing sounded a bit hamfisted) but overall, a lovely poem. Thanks for the read.


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