This was lovely and I really liked the raw emotion you portrayed in it! I definitely grasped how you felt and it made me feel emotional when reading it. The flow was nice and the rhyming was established nicely. There wasn't anything that I didn't find that I didn't like, so overall it was nicely written, I enjoyed the emotion, and the word choice was great!
This was a really lovely poem! I liked the idea that the lover is telling his/her's thoughts to him/her at midnight, to me I think it settles a sad-ish and a longing tone to it that the lover has for it's lover. [Hopefully that makes sense]. I really enjoyed the imagery and the word choice, definitely what kept me hooked! Overall it was nicely written and it was a lovely poem!
This was really great! I really enjoyed the words that you used, it definitely helped hooked the reader and I found it really intriguing to read. I also liked the imagery and I liked the idea behind the poem. There wasn't anything that I found dis-likable. Overall, it was nicely written and I really enjoyed reading it!
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