I think I'd laugh at that. In fact, you would recieve a "Darwin Award". This type of writing is interesting because it's part journal entry and part satirical journalism. None the less it's ammusing and a good quick read.
I'd like to see more of this poem! Maybe back it a bit longer and really explore all the meanings of "odds" You can really add to this if you feel like you should. I liked it though, keep it up!
When I read this I remembered when I was a little kid (not invisible) running around doing things like this! I think it's charming and full of great ideas for little pranksters. I've tried my share of children's literature, I'm really looking forward to reading some more in your portfolio. Have a great day!
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