It was good. You painted a wonderful picture of what was happening what the main character was like. I love how you used great descriptive words. Keep writing!
Nice, and I really want spring. I'm sick of snow. This poems flows pretty well and I like the rhyming which makes it fun to read. I hope to read more from you. -Becca
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