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Review by alaramii Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (3.5)
POST MORE PLEASE!

Seriously, I need to know what is in the basement!
A good read so far but the grammar is a bit off in places, however im pretty useless at grammar anyway.
What is important is the story and I like yours.
I would genuinely love to read more, so get cracking!
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Review by alaramii Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
This is beautiful!
It truly captures what daring to be loved feels like. The first flush of realising that you hope the other person loves you the way you love them.
While reading this it makes me believe that you are at that stage. I felt every heart beat, every racing throb of the pulse.

A lovely piece. Well done.
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Review by alaramii Author IconMail Icon
Rated: ASR | (4.0)
I cannot wait to read more of this. Im literally sitting here wishing for more. I need to know what is causing the dreams and who this mystery boy is and why she is keeping him from despair.
Please let me know when you write more, I would love to read the completed story.

Thanks for sharing xxx
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