Its awesome. It really makes you think about the problems that your own self. I loved it when you said that 'an empty sea moves quietly and still I dream'. It set a vivid mental picture of a rolling sea and the incomplexity of it. The simple pleasure of the ocean and simple pleasure or horror that can be percieved in your dreams.
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