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Review by Anna Loren Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 18+ | (3.0)
Interesting read. Good theme and hints of surprise. I enjoyed this read. Thanks for sharing!
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Review by Anna Loren Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
Wonderful premise for a poem. And what you have, great. The only suggestion I have, GO ALL OUT!! This poem, I believe, has potential to say even more. I like the example you used of your childhood. See if you can think of other ways to incorporate examples such as these. Im jealous of your first stanza. I wish it was my own! haha. I thought it was great. Keep up the great work!
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Rated: E | (4.5)
I love it! Very entertaining and well written read! Put a smile on my face.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Simple, yet elegant. A simple experience but a beautiful way of expressing it. I enjoyed this. It brought with it vivid pictures to mind. I think that, by itself, constitutes good writing. Well done.
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Review by Anna Loren Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
Good. There should be a , after achievement of goals.
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