This piece was very beautiful. You painted the story with your words and I felt as though I was standing before the universe myself. Whenever we are at our weakest point, we tend to look up for an answer. The moon was described very well as the narrator continues through the story. And to conclude, the narrator (standing in awe) realizes that his/her Lord was speaking to him/her through the majestic beauty reflecting from moon itself. Very inspiring!
I loved this piece. You guided my imagination across the dance floor. I really liked how you brought out that feeling where the reader realizes that they have lost control, and it is in that moment in which the horror began to grow. I felt satisfied after reading this.
I thought it was great! Your discriptions made me feel like I was in the story itself. The ending felt like it died out too fast, but thats mainly because I wanted it to continue.
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