Hey Lightspeed
This is a really well-written story! The atmosphere was electric and you really had us in your grip as much as the chief did on you! For a moment I thought I was going to be kidnapped and taken to Narnia, but then it turned out to be a truly tragic and moving story. Your writing's really good and every emotion, sensation and detail you described was clear and not superfluous at all! I really enjoyed this! Thanks for the read. Will get round to your other stuff and leave you notes when I do. Oh, I'm a noob, I don't know how to make myself a fan. Will try look for that button again.
Aynia
PS, I'm not sure what 'wavier' is, do you mean waver? Also, are you sure you want to spell through 'thru' in such a smart looking piece as this? Just my opinion :)
hi there
thanks for sharing those tips, i have indeed learnt a few things although i'm still not too sure about what you mean by creating an invalid address book name. how does invalid names stop them from sending stuff to all the other valid ones? i've never heard of this before. i confess i've been gullible enough to fall for a couple of things (specifically hyperlinks and replying to get off mailing list). because of a hyperlink that i thought was from someone i knew i actually put in my name and password!!!!! that was pretty stupid, i got blocked out of my account coz they changed my password and had to go to server to complain! it was so bad i've never done anything that stupid since. but thanks for pointing out the other possible traps!
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