Wow! Plot twist! At first, I thought it might get a little romantic and then BAM, he's dinner! There was so much feeling in so few words and I knew what your male character was about right off the ba. A guy like that would never even think that something like becoming someones entre would happen to them. He never saw it coming. It was fantastic, I loved it!
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