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Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
Hello Kactus Berry.
I have read your poem and I think it concise but very affecting. I think the most thing that is special about it is that it is not restricted to a certain
time period but fits with any war that happened in any time in history. I especially like the ending because it shows that war has no benefit--it only causes loss. I like that you presented this idea in solely four short lines.

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