oooooooooh boy I love the application of adjectives included in your writing. My brother has recently started his journey of writing, and the only advice I could give him (having little to no experience) was to use adjectives a lot. After reviewing his first work (a horror story of particularly unique form), I noticed that he was flawed in how he worked speech into the writing. He had nicely developed characters, but I could not identify who was speaking at times. He also had scenes that included anatomy descriptions (fibula/tibula instead of calf bones), which general audiences would not understand. I hope to convince him to put is works onto this site so that he could get more advice. Great work.
The thing I struggle the most with in my writing is personality. My real-life lack of self-awareness* and wisdom leaves me with little observation skills when physically observing others. Combined with my persistent ADHD and my general smarts, I am pretty much a stereotypical nerd. I bring this up because when I was young, my mom--who at the time was trying to figure out what was wrong with me--took me to a small ranch where I rode a horse for the first time. Of course, the horse was being led around by an instructor while I just rode in the saddle, but the experience was pretty much the same thing at the time for me. I was nervous, and at the same time, calm. This story reminds me of the experience.
*I can multitask better than others, but only on the rare occasions I can focus on just the tasks at hand(my head is often thinking several things at once)
I love the flexibility and story writing provided in this interactive. I have a soft spot for text adventures, and mad-lib style stories are hilarious and unpredictable, but can be anything you desire. I had a lot of fun with this interactive and played it a few times.
As a person who has read the entirety of The Divine Comedy, I appreciate the effort and theme built into this poem. The way of repetitive writing reminices that of a song instead of a poem, and the final line, "free now" is a bombastic end to the wrighting.
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