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Rated: E | (5.0)
I love this piece of writing, it reflects how every girl feels about themselves, you have portrayed the girl perfectly, as I read it I could imagine myself looking into the mirror and seeing exactly what the girl saw, I loved the simile at the end with how you described her as something broken, the imagery in this piece of writing is amazing.
You punctuated everything perfectly and your spelling is spot on, hard to believe you have dyslexia, keep at it, I really like your work!
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