The poem is a great one.I like the use of literary styles like rhyme and repetition which not only enhance the poem's musicality but also help in the comprehension of the subject matter.The intended attitude or mood of the poem i presume was sombre or sad which you have effectively brought out but for the expected mood to come out in a much stronger way,i believe that increasing the poem's length would be the best idea.Good job Emily.
Interesting story.I like the suspense at the end.The reader is left with questions in their mind such as,was Walt really telling the truth about his eyebrow?Was Sherry really a nymphomaniac like Norma said?e.t.c .What baffles me though is why the twins would run to Michelle's house considering their above described attitude towards her.Nonetheless the whole idea of the contrast between life in the city and life in Michelle's new neighborhood is great.Contrast as a style is one of the best recipes for a good story.
Awesome,great,fantastic,creative..i lack words to describe the magnificence of your story.It evokes so many emotions and reactions from the reader.Ranging from love,to pity to anger,to contempt and so much more.The magnitude of your creativity is quite abounding.In addition to that,i loved the vocabulary (which i must say i must borrow some time)Job well done.I look forward to reading more of your writing Durham.In fact your now one of my best role models since i am a beginner.Congrats once more.
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