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Rated: E | (5.0)
I really like the message behind this poem, you did a great job of capturing what it feels like to be buried under expectations without consideration of what's going on with you under the surface. You do a great job with the pairs of juxtaposed metaphors, my favorite is the comparison with Atlas and the ant, that is excellent.
Great work!
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