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Review of The Promise  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
hi simple dykie :)

This poem is simply beautiful. beautiful in its storytelling, in its rhyming and in its sadness.
It touches the heart and makes the reader ponder over it.
I really enjoyed reading your work.

keep writing and have a nice day. :)
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Review of Second  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (3.0)
hi awesomeness aman :)
I quite like your poem. A second really is all it takes to change a life. My favourite line is "it is a second that decides victory and it is that very second that decides defeat" - very true.
keep writing and have a nice day. :)
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