I really like your choice of words in all three poems but I will have to say my favorite poems was the first 2 "On Youth and On Love". Over all I think You Did An Excelent Job.
I really like this poem.It has much meaning behind it , I like how at the end, music is like her comforter.(While music flooded her soul Pumped her blood And rapidly beat her heart.She finally smiled). I can relate to her in that manner music makes me smile and it takes away all of my worries and anger and pain.
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