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Review of Three Short Poems  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
I really like your choice of words in all three poems but I will have to say my favorite poems was the first 2 "On Youth and On Love". Over all I think You Did An Excelent Job.
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Review of Teenage Anorexia  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I really Like This Story. I Can Tell You Put Alot Of Thought Into It, Instead Of Just Throwing Somthing Up. I Like That :) GREAT Job
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Review of The wrong photo  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (3.0)
This writing is one of the neatest in my opinoin. You have great examples imagery. I could actually vision each seen as I read.
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Review of Freedom  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
I really like this poem.It has much meaning behind it , I like how at the end, music is like her comforter.(While music flooded her soul Pumped her blood And rapidly beat her heart.She finally smiled). I can relate to her in that manner music makes me smile and it takes away all of my worries and anger and pain.
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