I enjoyed the thought of leaves being blue, and I enjoyed the setting as well. You should take a bit of time to check and make sure everything is spelled correctly, and punctuation is used properly. For the most part, it was a very well-rounded story. I adore the names Juskin and Vearma, so great job!
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