I had a lot of fun with this crossword puzzle. I think the topic was a good one, but I also think you could have gone with more uncommon subjects, such as creative writing, trig, German, etc. I just found the puzzle a little bit easy. But I still enjoyed it. Nice job!
That was absolutely amazing. I love King Arthur stories, but the Lady of Shalott holds a special place in my heart (me being the romantic I am). Your sense of rhyme is absolutely amazing. It never once seems forced, like so much rhyme these days is. It is completely natural. I generally prefer freeverse, but the rhyme was amazing. That was one of the best poems I've read in a long, long time. Please keep writing!
I can really relate to this poem. I have a habit of daydreaming to make my life more exciting. This poem describes what I could never put into words. The next time that someone scolds me for day dreaming, I'll show them your poem.
But really, this poem was very deep and well-written. I can tell that even if I hadn't been the perpetual daydreamer that I am, it would have affected me no less. NIce job.
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