Very nicely done. This would have made a much more acceptable sequel after Batman Returns than the sideshows that Hollywood insisted on producing. You definitely have the characters down pat. I hear them as I read and their voices rang as tru as they did in the movies. I'm sad to see Alfred gone.
I think it's very interesting how you established Grindewald's early identity as somehting a little similar to Tom Riddle's reinvention of himself under a different name. Without having read the seventh book, you made the logical assumption that Grindewald had a seperate identity with a different name.
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