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Review of Damaged Inside  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello katira,

I like this draft very much. I'm not sure if there is a hidden meaning or not, but I really felt I could relate to what I understood. One thing I want to ask about/ make you are of is that in the first line of the second stanza, damaged is spelled "damgaed". Was that intentional? I can see it either being a typo or something that adds meaning to the poem.

In any case, keep it up,

-inthemix
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Review of Accusations  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hello Elise Pehrson,

You've written a good poem about an interesting topic. One thing I want to ask though is: why do some sections rhyme while others don't?

-inthemix
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