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Review by Al Duke Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
I really liked this poem. It flowed nicely and had a nice rhythm; and it did this without rhyming "too much".

I liked how you merged the sadness of the tale with the respect of those who needed the buffalo and all it gave them.

Very nice poem, I'd like to read more of them!
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Review by Al Duke Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
What a great description of freedom. I liked the words you used, "To cry until the sponge of your heart is dried out" -- what a great visual!

Your poem was very moving; my only criticism would be that it feels like it should be a bit more "filled in". While beautiful; it almost feels like an outline. But I do like it :).
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Review of A Nuance of Need  Open in new Window.
Review by Al Duke Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
I really liked it. There was an expectation throughout... you just wanted to keep reading. I really liked the flow and the emotion.
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