I give it a little more than half of perfect. I don't know if this is part of something that you pst a little bit at a time to leave un-answered questions or something, I just dont understand it. Sensory language is definitely very good, It has a lot of it in small sections which is very good, my only advice, of course, unless this is a post-by-post thing, is: leave less to the imagination. ^-^ Very good writing though.
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