I generally do not like poetry. And it seems that is about a personal relationship that causes pain for you. I laughed. This was great. The correllation drawn between balloons and a busybody bag of air is exquisite. The switch between happy balloon talk and then what this poem is really about was enjoyable. I have no complaints. Your POV on life would be an entertaining reality TV show I suspect.
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