Love the flow and in depth defining moments of what "fun" could be considered by many people with different personalities or behaviors or emotions. Beautiful poem.
You are gripping me with these love poems of yours. A promise to give true love to the one your heart desires. A precious gift that we all asks when we yearn for love.
Wow! One heart, once felt love and then tragically felt it betray her. The other, a heart yearning to earn the love and trust of that broken heart. Beautifully done.
Beautiful and straight from the heart. I love poems that grab my attention and pull me into them and Sir, you have done that to me with this one. Love the flow of each verse and the true feelings that love can bring out from our soul. God bless.
Beautiful and a poem that makes me feel as if I am there within that exact place. I love poems like that, which takes you to places that you dream of or that takes you to the place the writer is. Beautiful and also heartwarming.
Beautiful,meaningful, and truth written. Indeed, there is nothing as special, calming to the heart, warming to the soul, than family. A bond between family is a bond that cannot be broken.
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