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Rated: E | (3.0)
The poem is a bit stale, It good its in the first, I get what you mean, but there is something missing. It needs a conclusion. Something to make the reader feel your sorrow or the unhappiness in your poem. I can't really know what you should write but it is up to you. Something different at the end. Not bad, but could be better.
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