This is truly inspiring, it sounds like you at least have a good person in your corner with that and the love of God you are blessed. Your poem has very good rythym to it,and it's ryme scheme is also great. I will pray for you so that your sickness doesn't put out your inpirational fire. Good luck and keep on writing. Tony
You have a well written story,i really liked the short to the point sentences,this is something I try to icorporate in my writing. Even though they are short they are still very descriptive,espically when the narrator asks, Have you ever heard the story,....while he was climbing.But,in the end is he asking himself the question or is he asking the other person?,I didnt get it.
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