Hello Cat Voleur
This is looking so good! It got me so excited to know the whole story though I don't know if you have written whatever happens after this already because I saw that this was written a few years ago, so I will go through your portfolio to see if I can find something. Anyway thanks for this!
I really liked the fact that you incorporated the story of a real person into your story. I personally haven't ever read any story with real roots to any of the characters and so perhaps I am being weird by being so fascinated with this idea, but anyway thanks for writing this. This got me thinking whether you would be interested into expanding this into something like a collection of short stories with perhaps the same protagonist ( Bill) encountering such instances as he travels around the States. I am from India and so I don't know if you had to research to find out about Hazel Miner Or if her story is well known in its own bit really liked the fact that I got to know about such a person. I feel like with everything that happens around us and our lives we sometimes loose touch of others and I feel very grateful that I got to know about her and thus I would like to read more such stories about such people and so yeah please give it a thought. Anyway I am sorry if this comes out as intrusive to any personal ideas that you might have regarding this story and I believe whatever you decide would be the best and um see you around
Best regards
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