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Review of Rahu's Game  Open in new Window.
Review by Vincent Pierce Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
I think you're very talented, the poem rhymes without sounding ridiculous which I've seen a lot of poems do, plus it does make my imagination try to envision exactly what you've written about. There are three things that come immediately to mind, for me anyway.

1) A succubus that steals souls
2) A relationship that's gone beyond bad to the point of being harmful
3) A person that's wandering through life aimlessly causing damage to those she meets

Keep on writing, I like your work a lot
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