Hi...I like this free poem, not tied to rhyming pattern...And just like the title, it shows how true friends are...Maybe we could just change the title to "my bestfriend" instead of 'my friend", that is just a suggestion...However, i don't really get what you want to portray in the first verse...It's like an individual verse that separate from the other 2 verses....To conclude, I like this poem, it's nice especially the 2nd & 3rd verses....
Hi...it is a simple poem...the rhyming pattern is quite nice "mood, food, fox, rocks"....But i don't really like the word 'box' there, maybe you could change with another word...But after all, it is a nice simple poem....
Froot Loops are my favorite food, I eat them to cheer up my mood....
The title somehow attracts me to read the poem...
Not tied to rhyming pattern, a free poem....
I like how you said "tears of acid that burn down my cheeks"
It portrays crying in a cute way :)
after all, it is a nice poem
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