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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I really love this poem. The format and rhythm helps to express the emotion in the words of the poem, and the simple spaces and lack of punctuation adds some hesitation and anticipation, forcing the reader to think about every phrase. I love to use this type of free-hand format in my poetry actually, and the fact that you used a bit of rhyme made it flow that much better. Great job! You portrayed the emotions of this poem wonderfully!
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