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Review of Lies  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
The Lies that I’ve told,
The hearts I’ve broken.
Now it’s my turn,
I pray.

That these lies where never told.

allow me to add this line as a finale. I like your poem. It is like the persona is trying to fit in a group but has to tell lies in order to be accepted. I like it.. keep up the good work dear. :)
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Rated: E | (4.0)
The title is catchy especially to the brokenhearted. When I read it I noticed two characters in the poem. I find it very interesting, the emotion of the person who wrote this is so strong that it reflected on the poem. As the reader I think the point that needs to be improve is the last part i find it a little confusing. Anyway, reading a poem depends on how the reader interprets it. Overall, it's great!
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