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Rated: E | (4.5)
Wonderfully written story, touches the right chords of the reader's mind. It is very engrossing and impossible to stop till one reaches the end. A beautiful piece of work, with the proper sketches of characters and very good storyline. In short a perfect food for the soul.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
One of the best stories I have read in a long time, very well written, nice beginning and the twist in the end is just mind-blowing! It leaves one speechless. The flashbacks of memory, the description of pleasure and pain, the depths of Patty's psychology is very touching. It is indeed a fine piece of work!
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Rated: 18+ | (3.5)
Exceptional plot... very nicely written with proper bonding of words, intrigues the reader on and on as the plot reveals itself in a nice pace, the writer makes good use of curiosity that he ignites in the beginning and it held on to since the last line, an offbeat and beautiful finishing!
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Rated: 13+ | (3.0)
The beginning is excellent, it builds anticipation for the reader.. the first paragraph really interests a new reader.. As the story moves, it would be better if some more clarity would be given about why Margie would so meticulously maintain her garden, the state of her mind precisely and her need to have a full blown garden in such detail.. There is scope of playing with the character's psychology a bit more.. The ending is portrayed in a bang on sudden way hitting right at the point in the reader's mind.
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